Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Poetry Rant


Toilet
Triolet

My bathroom now is drenched with pee;
It's like an urban alley.
Such a mess from one so wee--
My bathroom now is drenched with pee.
The puddles you don't seem to see,
As from the room you sally.
My bathroom now is drenched with pee;
It's like an urban alley.

5 comments:

ShackelMom said...

Too perfect! I called mine, "The gang that couldn't shoot straight..."

Hillary said...

My goodness that is a form-fitting subject.

Gypmar said...

Luanne, I guess I should be thankful that my gang with poor aim is comprised of only two boys!

Hillary, I would have never have encountered that form were it not for your gift of "A Kick in the Head," which I pulled out today for inspiration :)

Mullins said...

I've been down that alley before and it's not pretty. Cheers to mothers and fathers!

Lisa said...

Glad to see you are keeping up with your poetry! :-)